It's very rare to see anything from the shoujo version of this series, glad you
made this =) Very well done, although the "marker" needs to be less
obtrusive - a tatoo like that on her decolatage isn't....becoming [as, say, the
flower]
Beautiful job, especially with the eyes and the hair - I like the way the hair
flows/pools. Keep it up! I'd love to see a more fleshed out version of this!
Nicely done =) I like it, it's nice and clean. Keep it up! My only criticism
is, it's rather small =( But that's just because I have a big resolution ^_^
I like it =) One thing, though - as was mentioned before, I think fading the
text detracts from the image. Otherwise, I think it's great. Wings taken from
a famous Belldandy image, ne? Good job =)
This if a good attempt with poor execution:
-- left-hand foreground image is somewhat inappropriate
-- the blur is enough to cause people to cry, involunteerily as their eyes try
to focus
--- even without the blur, it's 2 non-matching-art images with poor extraction
slapped onto a rather generic background [that we really can't see for the
blurring and other filters] I imagine the blurring was an attempt to make the
images "mesh" with each other and the background, but all it did was
emphasize the lack of coordination and harmony in the image.
Some suggestions:
-- use only 1 character graphic. Two usually detract from each other and cause
the eye to become restless trying to decide which is the focus.
-- ditch the blur except in small, discrete instances where it'll soften or
enhance the image. Don't use it to hide sloppy work.
-- spend some more time in the planning stage: consider your background or image
(whichever you start with) and take the time to plot where the character should
go, what colors work best with him/her/them, and where you want to draw the
eye.
-- don't choose an image just because you want to get points with the guys
because they're "hot lesbians!" It's tacky and immature, and ads no
value to your image. "lesbian" images could be better used in
"tender" circumstances [which, btw, you almost achieve with this
image]. Eyegrab should be done with quality, not cup-size or nudity.
-- as Xian said, you need to work on your extraction. The left foreground image
is especially in need of some extraction TLC.
Hope that helps.
WAY too cute! Well done, I faved it, and hope to see it on the main page!
While too small for my screen, it's a very pretty image. I wish it were larger so I could use it! =)
Beautiful! Good extraction and nice, clean image. I like it. =)
It's very rare to see anything from the shoujo version of this series, glad you made this =) Very well done, although the "marker" needs to be less obtrusive - a tatoo like that on her decolatage isn't....becoming [as, say, the flower]
VERY beautifully done! I look forward to seeing more of your work =)
This is one of my favorite images from that artbook =) Glad you posted it.
Beautiful job, especially with the eyes and the hair - I like the way the hair flows/pools. Keep it up! I'd love to see a more fleshed out version of this!
Really well done =) I appreciate the work you put in on the background!
Nicely done =) I like it, it's nice and clean. Keep it up! My only criticism is, it's rather small =( But that's just because I have a big resolution ^_^
You've turned out some really nice ones. This is another such =) Good job.
Really really pretty. Love it!
I really love the effects and the concept, but the image quality is rather poor =( Perhaps a re-release with a cleaned-up image? I'd love to see that!
Very well done =) I like the way you brought out the traditional feel and merged it with this series. Very nice =)
Very pretty =) I like it. The posts of the fence, however, look eerily like milk bottles
Is this like the last [not your own]? Rips are bad, babe.
I like it =) One thing, though - as was mentioned before, I think fading the text detracts from the image. Otherwise, I think it's great. Wings taken from a famous Belldandy image, ne? Good job =)
I don't like that she's naked, but I absolutely love the composition and colors. Good job.
WAY disgustingly cute!
The bg
looks a tiny bit grainy, but overall the image blends well with it and is good
quality. Good job!
Awesome image, but the text doesn't stand out enough to add, and the quality of the text makes it a detracting feature.
This if a good attempt with poor execution:
-- left-hand foreground image is somewhat inappropriate
-- the blur is enough to cause people to cry, involunteerily as their eyes try to focus
--- even without the blur, it's 2 non-matching-art images with poor extraction slapped onto a rather generic background [that we really can't see for the blurring and other filters] I imagine the blurring was an attempt to make the images "mesh" with each other and the background, but all it did was emphasize the lack of coordination and harmony in the image.
Some suggestions:
-- use only 1 character graphic. Two usually detract from each other and cause the eye to become restless trying to decide which is the focus.
-- ditch the blur except in small, discrete instances where it'll soften or enhance the image. Don't use it to hide sloppy work.
-- spend some more time in the planning stage: consider your background or image (whichever you start with) and take the time to plot where the character should go, what colors work best with him/her/them, and where you want to draw the eye.
-- don't choose an image just because you want to get points with the guys because they're "hot lesbians!" It's tacky and immature, and ads no value to your image. "lesbian" images could be better used in "tender" circumstances [which, btw, you almost achieve with this image]. Eyegrab should be done with quality, not cup-size or nudity.
-- as Xian said, you need to work on your extraction. The left foreground image is especially in need of some extraction TLC.
Hope that helps.
Very pretty. Not terribly involved, but I like nice, quiet, somber walls =)
Way too cute! I especially like the hair and eyes. And the critter is delightful!
LOVE the wings! =) Only thing is, the arm seems a tiny bit thin, esp toward the wrist. Overall, I love it, though! =)
Very pretty =) I really like it!